Logo Learning Part 6

Fif is right, the lettering isn't correct., mostly cause I was basically just having a grown up, artistic, "temper tantrum' because I was sick to death of the whole idea of having to make a church logo be "masculine" instead of inclusive...but, really, I just needed to remember the C.A.R.P lessons of good design of Robin Williams (not that Robin Willams). Without it, you end up with CRAP.

C - contrast
A - alignment
R - repitition
P - proximity
I had some contrast, but not quite enough in the font. I don't think it's colour as much as the fact that the contrast between the two letters that was missing.

Next and last...attempt at this one...all out of my system now.